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10
It's the UN Mediator, right?
You're the UN Mediator, right?
*I believe a person is not "it"*

13
One centimeter a month.
Just one centimeter in a month.
*The context is that she just cut her hair, and after this 1 month, it only grew for a centimeter*

14
It'll be a while before\Nmy hair grows back...
*lit. It'll take some time before my hair reaches its previous length.*

16
Good morning, girls.
*lit. Good morning, everyone.*

21
No, I was helping my grandfather\Nwith a scientific study.
No, I was at my grandfather's place for his academic research.
*be warned, I'm pretty literal in tling*

22
*if 21 is applied, change wording to keep consistency*

24
Diving into a sea of knowledge and culture!
A fountain of knowledge and culture!

27
Ah, I heard that today's job\Nwould require some brawn,
*lit. physical work*

28
but I only see young ladies around.
*lit. but it seems only young ladies are around.*

29
There is also a communal hunt today...
That's because there's a communal hunt today, apparently.
*adding some words to increase context*

30
You're in charge, so you'll\Nneed to lead the others.
I'll leave it all to you, so could you take care of the rest?
*It's spoken in this way. "the others" is actually included as well. Maybe the editor knows a fine alternative?*

36
You'll find hot water and other\Ntools inside the building.
You're free to use hot water and other\Ntools inside the building.
*as in, free to use everything*

38
The chickens in the front room\Nhave stopped laying eggs.
*lit. The chickens in the front room are laying less and less eggs.*

39
Turn them all into meat.
(alt. You can turn them all into meat. (for nicer reception))
idem for 42

43
{\an9}Live Chickens
{\an9}Lively Chickens
*I've never heard of live chickens. They perform? *

45
What, exactly, is the second step in this process?
What process goes in between these phases?
*lit. solution*

46
Well, I already know the answer.
*lit. Well, it's not as if I don't know.*

62
humankind -> mankind it is.

65
They're escaping to the outside!
They're running away!

83
Under normal circumstances, we'd have been dressed down
Under normal circumstances, we'd receive some good scolding
*It's still correct, but I know I never use the verb  "to dress down" someone*

220
Meetings tend to proceed\Nwithout any set agenda,
Meetings seem to proceed with no difficulties,

221
and they can evolve into masked\Nmonsters which add all sorts of hidden costs.
but they are in fact masked monsters which consume all the costs.
*needs edit*

243
Then why are we out here searching?
Then why do we have still have to search for them?
*they we're ordered to*

308
Okay, this is FairyCo.
Okay, this seems to be the FairyCo.

416
Er, I've lost my appetite...
Er, I've already lost my appetite...

424
No, thank you.
No need.